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 Redo front covers using same images but attempt to get composition better. Redo cover lines so they can be more visible and less ‘clunky’ looking on the second one. Change masthead- perhaps allure is easier. Take more photos to have a better range across the contents pages. Finally, do more work on website. 

1st draft NEA

https://19-cche.wixsite.com/lueur-1

Website progress 7

 

Contents page progress 5

 

I've started editing the coverlines to no longer be placeholders and better show the layout. I took inspiration of the style and actual content from the Vogue magazines 

I need to make photos on the contents page bigger. I'm not a fan of the photo on the top because it's too small to see the person and the quality is bad when zoomed in. I will definitely change it for something else. I may also add more photos since lots of people are doing one whole half of their contents as one image. It's kind of hard to go off of Vogue because their contents isn't a double page now but I'm trying to translate it other nonetheless. I'll likely check out vanity fair and glamour contents pages to see what they do. 

Website progress 6

 To add- 

Two front covers

look at contents in vogue- add to website

edit about us section

get video clips for dynamic look

Website progress 5

 

I added a slideshow today to add an interactive element and showcase more photos. The rest are screenshots of what the website looks like as a whole as of right now. Lots still needs to be done 

Website progress 3

 

I've continued work on my website now and progress is still a bit slow as I'm still familiarising myself with wix. I've found out how to do something new- linking secret page so that the viewer can be redirected to something without going to a new visible page or new tab. This is really helpful because now I can link lots of articles and pages under one page so the menu remains nice and clean but I can still add lots to the website. I'm thinking of a gallery page to add the rest of my photos too for fans to see. I'm also going back and forth on whether to add my video clip on the home page or the about page.