front cover work 24/11/25

 

New front cover beginning

 

changed masthead to allure- similar meaning and effect but easier to understand and pronounce as to not isolate audiences. Retouched new photo using various tools on photoshop to give a more even look. Will brighten the image as a next step and try out a few different masthead colours.

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 Redo front covers using same images but attempt to get composition better. Redo cover lines so they can be more visible and less ‘clunky’ looking on the second one. Change masthead- perhaps allure is easier. Take more photos to have a better range across the contents pages. Finally, do more work on website. 

1st draft NEA

https://19-cche.wixsite.com/lueur-1

Website progress 7

 

Contents page progress 5

 

I've started editing the coverlines to no longer be placeholders and better show the layout. I took inspiration of the style and actual content from the Vogue magazines 

I need to make photos on the contents page bigger. I'm not a fan of the photo on the top because it's too small to see the person and the quality is bad when zoomed in. I will definitely change it for something else. I may also add more photos since lots of people are doing one whole half of their contents as one image. It's kind of hard to go off of Vogue because their contents isn't a double page now but I'm trying to translate it other nonetheless. I'll likely check out vanity fair and glamour contents pages to see what they do. 

Website progress 6

 To add- 

Two front covers

look at contents in vogue- add to website

edit about us section

get video clips for dynamic look